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Dear professor,

I finally uploaded latest version of my thesis with your remarks (for which I´m really grateful) incorporated.

The introduction is completely rewritten and both of sources dealing with the role of interdisciplinarity in the domain of data sonification are now cited. As for the chapter dealing with parameter mapping sonification, much more information has been added for both data and sound mapping. Your argument, as I re-evaluated the whole structure, as well as coherence of both theoretical and practical part, was valid. It is necessary to have both aspects covered extensively for the sake of meeting the objectives and answering research questions. One question still remains unanswered nonetheless. If we focus on interactive methods for sonifying data, shouldn´t we also include ISon as reviewed source?

Also, let me please appologize for such a delay on my side, the reasons are following: I was preoccupied with two other assignments, which were urgent. Also some technical difficulties regarding my personal computer prevented me to work on tuesday and wednesday.

My hope is that this version will finally be sufficient,

Also, let me please express gratitude for your helpful attitude during supervision and I am looking forward for your next critical feedback!

With best regards,

Marek Štvrtňa

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